Feedback

As a class we all watched eachothers opening sequence and got feeback for it. We found that our opening sequence had a number of things that could be improved for example, in some shots the diegetic sound is interrupted by laughing heard in the background. We fixed this by filming pick ups. Another problem with our opening sequence was that the running scene wasn't believable, it looked at though they were jogging rather than running, to fix this we also needed to re film, although we did try to speed up the clips but that didn't work as it didn't look real.